Blog Makeover: Lori Lowe's 'Life Gems'

It’s Makeover Monday — today we’re reviewing Lori Lowe’s blog, Life Gems. I’ll give Lori some suggestions for ways she can improve her blog, and then it’s up to her to either:

  1. make do-it-yourself improvements
  2. hire the team at Blogging Bistro to do it for her (we have talented graphic designers and developers in our stable who work wonders on Web sites and blogs)
  3. do nothing. But that wouldn’t be right!

Join the fun — enter your your blog in the Monday Makeover Challenge.

Lori’s blog is hosted at WordPress.com, a free blog hosting service (this is different than a self-hosted WordPress.org site, which gives you many more customization options). She’s using Cutline, a popular, but somewhat Spartan theme. Here’s a screenshot:

First, the positives:

  • You update your blog several times a week, which is great. It lets your follows know you mean business, and assures them that you’re consistently going to deliver helpful content.
  • Your blog posts are interesting and entertaining, and they stick closely to your theme of “tips for improving your marriage.”  Some recent post titles, for example:

Is Your Cell Phone Impeding Your Relationship?

How to Keep a Marriage Strong in the Face of Infertility

Current Divorce and Marriage Rates

Is There a Case for Settling in Marriage?

What are the Best Divorce Predictors?

A Personal Story: Pornography and Marriage

True Connectivity

Join Online Love Dare™ Community

Prospects Strong for those Wishing to Marry Later

Is Love a Decision or a Feeling?

  • You regularly include guest posts. This gives your fans an opportunity to be featured, and it allows you to cover a wider range of topics and perspectives.
  • You’ve beefed up your blog by adding two additional pages, an About page (essential) and a page that promotes your free e-book.

Here are some suggestions for improvement:

  • Your topic lends itself well to searches, but your Search box is buried “below the fold” in your sidebar (in other words, readers have to scroll down to see it). I’d move it up so your readers can quickly search for topics of interest to them.
  • You also have a presence on Twitter and Facebook, but your “follow me” icons are scattered throughout your sidebar. I’d group them so readers can see all your social networks at a glance.

Branding

You’re writing a book called First Kiss to Lasting Bliss: How Adversity Can Unite a Marriage, in which couples share their experiences with drug addiction, infidelity, military separation, opposing religions, stranger rape, life-threatening illness, financial crises and much more. Their lessons will help any couple prepare for or overcome difficulties.

I’m assuming that your blog is your primary means of building your reputation as an expert on adversity in marriage so that when your book comes out, you’ll have a strong, loyal following who will buy your book.

If that’s the case, I recommend thinking about the following:

Blog name Life Gems is a short, catchy title. But how does it advance your “marriage” brand? More importantly, how does your blog title alert search engines to your blog’s theme?

Header – How does the header image of a café in a city relate to your “marriage” brand?

Theme – Your site is clean and uncluttered, but some additional color might be nice. Marriage, after all, isn’t clean, white, and uncluttered. Look at other marriage sites and evaluate how they use color and imagery to enhance their message.

Images – Speaking of images, only a few of the posts on your blog’s front page use images, and they’re various sizes and in various locations. Strive for an image in every post, in a consistent location every time.

Mailing List – You’re going to need a strong mailing list to help your promote your upcoming book. I suggest tying in your free e-book to a mailing list subscription. For instance: “Subscribe to my mailing list and instantly receive my free e-book, Love Everyday: Thoughts on Loving Amidst the Chaos of Life.” That way, your fans get your book in exchange for giving you permission to market to them. It’s a win-win for everyone.

Readers, what additional elements did you notice that Lori can work on improving?

*If you’d like to submit your blog to our Monday Makeover Challenge, check out the guidelines.

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  • http://twitter.com/LoriLowe Lori Lowe

    Thank you so much for your valuable input!

  • http://bloggingbistro.com/ Laura Christianson

    You're very welcome, Lori!

  • http://www.susangaddis.net Susan Gaddis

    Great suggestions–very helpful. I'm still learning how to do the online marketing thing also, so I enjoy reading the blog makeovers. It is hard sometimes to find time to put your comments into practice as my writing is not my main work, but it gives me goals to aim for even if I don't get to your suggestions until weeks later. So thanks for helping us all out there in web-land!

    My only input would be to ask if Lori also has an author website even before her book comes out where she could highlight her published articles and include testimonies of how her writings have helped others. Of course this could also be done on her blog by adding additional pages–turning the blog into more than a blog. Such a page could include some of the key comments from her blog posts. Just a suggestion.

  • http://bloggingbistro.com/ Laura Christianson

    Excellent suggestions, Susan! In fact, Lori followed up with me to ask whether she should have an author Web site. And yes, as an alternative, she can add additional pages to her WordPress.com blog to make it more Websitey. Is that a word?

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  • Bethany Macklin

    As always, Laura’s post was very helpful! Good job Lori on what you’ve already done on your blog design. I think Laura’s suggestions will take it to the next level.